ON BREAKING DAWN

Dawn waked quietly
As she spread her golden wings
And edged across a concave sky
To make a new day sing
Lazy shadows huddled ’round
Content to remain, quite clear
Yet willingly acquiesced
When urged with such bright cheer
Trees stretched, robins sang
And sparkling dew began to fade
Yet it all seemed well and proper
As darkness couldn’t play
So with the way prepared
The sun slid past the rim
And glorious light filled the sphere
As a new day echoed hymns

Thanks to my grandson, Jeremy Dodd, for furnishing the last line to this poem.

 

 

 

On Breaking Dawn

10 thoughts on “ON BREAKING DAWN

    1. Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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  1. “Dawn waked quietly
    As she spread her golden wings
    And edged across a concave sky”

    Amazing lines

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    1. Thank you Burning Sky I appreciate your comment. I try to make my poetry seem like pictures and I so like it when someone notices the resemblance! Stop by any time!

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      1. Yes continue you on with your imagery

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  2. Stunningly beautiful Marie! 🙂 ❤

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  3. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing

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    1. thank you for stopping by. Glad you liked it!

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